@ Pop Syndicate-- Sugarshock
"Much like its main character, Sugarshock quickly loses its focus and becomes about nothing even as it wants to be about something. What that is, I’m not too sure. Even as Dandelion starts going off on non-sequitor tangents, the robot bassist asks “were you even here?” You’ve almost got to ask the same thing of Whedon as you go from one page to another; was he even here to see what he wrote two pages before? Sugarshock is the writing of an author who has earned the freedom to do whatever he wants and all he wants to do is play around with words and characters without creating any kind of recognizable narrative. Sure, there’s a loose story here but it exists secondary to allowing Whedon, through Dandelion, to throw out ridiculous and incoherent dialogue like “By the spirit of my in-no-way-Viking ancestors… You… Will… Be… Legs!” Really, Dandelion says “you will be legs” but it’s is kind of amusing in the story. Everything outside of Dandelion’s ramblings exists just to provide the illusion of a story."
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